Hi Snapshot,
Yes, this message looks great!
The message is clear, it’s placed under the correct category (Utility), and the tone is service-related, not promotional.
However, if you'd like to slightly increase the approval chances, you can add a closing line to make the purpose even more obvious. For example:
“Hi {{1}}, your order {{2}} has been delivered successfully. We hope you’re happy with your purchase! If you have any questions or need support, feel free to contact us.”
This kind of closure helps Meta understand that it’s part of your customer service flow.
Once submitted, it should go through smoothly. Let me know once it’s approved — or if you face any issues at all, I’m here to help!
Best regards,
Waexpert